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Language Arts

Critiquing

This year in Language Arts class I believe I grew in critiquing.

One endeavor that proves I grew in critiquing is the Storybook Project. The Storybook was a project you did with a partner where you created a children’s book to teach young kids about peer pressure, effective communication or refusal skills. The Storybook PowerPoint critique was before the next endeavor’s critique and I don’t think I gave as good feedback when I did the next endeavor’s critique. Since I did better the second time around, I improved in my critiquing.

Another endeavor that proves I grew in critiquing is The Steal a Line Poem. The Steal a Line poem was just a poem but every stanza had a line from a book or a movie or something. The line had to be an exact quote and your poem had to be based upon it.

 

My first artifact that proves my growth is the PowerPoint we critiqued for the Storybook PowerPoint Critique. This is what other people critiqued and is an example. You can see we worked hard on it. We chose refusal skills and rhyming for our story. We used watercolors for pictures, but those haven’t been created yet at this point. This proves my growth because my partner and I didn’t respond as well to people’s critiques and suggestions than when we did in the Steal a Line Poem critique. Like originally, we were thinking, this is a dumb piece of advice and then after, we really gave it some thought and really considered it.

 

My second artifact that proves my growth is my Final Steal a Line Poem. You can see that I put a lot of effort into the rhymes and even listened to people’s suggestions. I know one green hat comment was to remove a stanza about how I didn’t seem to be making sense so I made it more obvious that I was talking about myself. A green hat comment is a piece of critique that gives someone a suggestion. There is a Green Hat, Black Hat, Red Hat, Yellow Hat, White Hat, and Blue Hat. Each is a different type of critique. We use these hats almost every day to critique our work. They are important guidelines at DRSS. A stanza is a basically a group of lines in a poem usually having 4 lines. This proves my growth because I responded better to the suggestions than when we did the Storybook PowerPoint critique.

 

In conclusion, I grew in critiquing and this will help me in the future. I grew greatly over a lot of endeavors and am now especially thoughtful. This will help me in the future because when I have to work with other people and listen to their advice, I can really apply it better and really think about what they are saying instead of brushing it off.

This is my 1st artifact, a younger version of my Storybook. We critiqued it in class. 

This is my 2nd artifact, Final Steal a Line Poem. I named it "Dear Penn"

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